Showing posts with label Exercises of the Week - Week One. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Exercises of the Week - Week One. Show all posts

Sunday, March 2, 2008

Exercise of the Week - Week One, Attempt One

The first thing she noticed when they crossed the border was a thick fringe of fir trees along the horizon that served as a backdrop for one lone oak tree.


The tree was stripped are, her every fault visible without her robe of green chiffon tied tight under her chin and the large hood thrown over her head. Her scarred torso and the thickness of her once slim arms weighted down at the wrist by the bulk of her hands with their twisted knuckles, mangled and arthritic.


The first thing she noticed when they crossed the border was an oak tree. The tree stood bare without her green robe tied tight under her chin with its large hood thrown over her head. It
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Saturday, March 1, 2008

Writing Exercise for this Week

I'm going to try something to develop my writing (while I wait for any of the three writing groups to start up or to get my writing books in the mail, damn you amazon.fr!). I'm going to write a paragraph I like about anything, and then rewrite the same paragraph every day for a week. If at any time I like it just the way it is, I'll stop, assignment completed.

If any of you fellow Bards try this, post your first paragraph and your last in the comments if you want feedback. I'll be posting mine each day, with the starting paragraph on top with my own comments to show how I progressed.
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